My story, "Luna"

So far I've written three chapters for this installment, and can be read at www.webook.com/project/luna

I'd really appreciate it if you took the time to read it, and give me your opinions :) The main influnece for this story was Jesus' crucifiction and what it stood for. It follows a young woman named Elizabeth, who finds herself in a beautiful new world, and she must stand up and become who she was born to be in order to save this world and her own...Oh yeah, it's very tragic too. Think along the lines of...The Children of Hurin :)

That was great. Your writing is superb. Did you edit it yourself?

Thanks :) Yeah I did, although I nearly had to rewrite the whole first chapter because my tenses were all mixed up lol.

Indeed. I've been busy and stressed and I read the first little bit and not tehj whole thing yet.. it looks really well done. Good job, luna.